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My seams are ripped
and my fabric is fraying
most of the time
I don't know what I'm saying
You pull on one thread
and the whole thing comes loose
instead of a swan
my down's from a goose
A tawdry piece of lace
instead of a fine piece of satin
I'm just a torn tapestry
just waiting to happen
©2005-2009 ^Platinus
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I realize the imagery is a tad un focused...
But the images kind of share a common theme.
I haven't it yet though.

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I like how you balanced the rhyming, the talking tapestry is confusing me, is it already destroyed? Has it been destroyed, fixed and is waiting to be destroyed again? the dream to become something great is already being cut down by unnecessary fear...case of serious low self esteem and pessimism...

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T'is cool and cute little poem.

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Rhyme's so hard to get right in poems, usually it sounds really cheesy but you've done a great job
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Thanks.

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Thank you.
Though, it isn't cool and cute the way I'm feeling...

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Well, it's pretty crappy (unpoetic) right now, and if it were hung on a laundry line, the first breeze would tear and tatter it.(poetic)
Understand?

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good job :D

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