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Captivating the Ghost

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UF 5

ealry morning mania...

Edit: I reworked it a little bit because I wasn't so happy with it.
Now I'm slightly more content :D
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The first thing I have to say is I absolutely love the grain. I think it gives it texture, feeling... a deeper sense of "realism," even.

When looking at the piece, I see an old junkyard in NYC, honestly. I love how it gives the appearance of jumbled and worn; it's a nice break from all the neat, perfect, shiny fractals I see so often.

The only thing that really bothers me is the bottom...compared to the business of the rest of the piece, it feels a bit left out. I'm no good with fractals at all, but I think maybe you could add just a little something to offset the imbalance.

Great work! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" />